Story Cubes story:
It was just past lunch at school and we were doing a magic show. It was my turn. I put down a pyramid then showed them the inside of it and set it down. I whispered a few words and raised the pyramid. There was not a beetle under it like there was supposed to be. I looked under the table where I had hidden the beetle. The beetle was gone. Instead, there was a Lego building. I ducked under the table and looked inside it. Inside the Lego building was the beetle and a fish, which was trying to gobble it up. Since I couldn't get inside it, I put a key inside, which I knew the beetle would crawl on. Then I took a magnet and stuck it on top of the Lego building and took off the roof. There the beetle was, stuck on the key on the other side of the roof. A lady with a cane squished the beetle.
The end (of the beetle).
Yikes! What a surprise ending! I really liked how you slowed down the action -almost step by step of your magic trick. Your writing is really improving!
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