Story Cubes story:
It was 2:00 A.M., and I was sleeping. I sensed something weird; my fish was not in his tank. I went back to sleep. When I woke up, it was 8:00, and I still couldn't find my fish. I searched with my family for about one hour with flashlights and still couldn't find him. After a rain storm that afternoon, a rainbow came out; I knew my fish liked rainbows so I stood by the pond. For several minutes I couldn't see a sign of him but then he popped out of the water with a turtle tailing him. I quickly pulled him out of the water. When the stars came out, I compared his weight with his weight before. He weighed less. He must have lost weight chasing and swimming away. A bee buzzed by my ear and I ran inside and put him (who I would call lucky) in his tank.
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This is an interesting story about Lucky. I like how you included the passage of time within your story -2:00 AM, 8:00, several minutes passed, etc.
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