This is a changed up part of Eleven:
"It has to belong to somebody", Ms. Price keeps saying. "I think it belongs to Phyllis I say." Ms. Price says "Yes I saw Phyllis wearing it one day. "I think it's Silvia's," Phyllis said but nobody is listening because Ms. Price is all ready turning to page 32. I whisper to myself "Good thing I got out of it." When recess comes Phyllis says "Why did you say that?" because I saw you wearing it at recess one day."
I love that you tried this out Evan! I wonder what Rachel is thinking about her age when she says to herself, "Good thing I got out of it" ? Does she feel older?
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