Yesterday after noon to this morning there was a snow storm. There was about 14 inches of snow on average. When I walked in the snow it was up to my knees. If I put my hands at my sides, my hands would almost be touching the snow. I had to shovel some snow off of the porch and the drive way.The windows were half covered in snow. I didn't have school. Tomorrow I won't have school. The snow was very soft and hard to walk on.
This is a nice piece to practice writing sensory images. Writing how the snow looks, feels, sounds (under your footsteps, when it is falling), smells and tastes can help engage your reader. Nice job with describing how much snow had fallen -the specific height and also personal references made it easy for me to picture it!
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